A Black Rose-
Death.
Shall I send myself
This Black Rose.
Shall it match the
Black tears that fall.
Is this, with my
love just a Black Rose.
By pain, and blood.
Anguish, tears, pain.
I grind my teeth from
the anger I have.
Bloody, red tears.
Fall into a Black puddle
of petals.
A Black Rose-
Anguish, Blood, Tears-
Death.
Please tell me what you think
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wowie it's so very good!!
black this black that...i really like black too
i see you either put alot of emotion to this or you are just so very freakin good with poetry
i would give you applauses but i ran out so very sorry!
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Very nice! I sincerely loved this. I can barely describe how, except for saying you have a talent with words. This piece was amazing and created some very real raw and sincere imagery. Very nicely done.
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loved it.
once again, i love your writing. a black rose, or a tear, or blood those elements make poetry stronger. my poems are a little alike. loved yours, felt related. XoXo* -
powerful.good
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thank you for the comments
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