I felt loved for the first time in my life.
Like I was accually wanted here
But i know it won't last long
We'll have our ups and downs.
Eventualy we'll make up and start over again
But I don't think I could take it any more
with the fighting, the breakings, and the making ups.
Its all to much to handle but right now
I feel like I am in the right place at the
Right time and being loved for the frist time.
A contest entry
- Imagery by Mainzy.
600 points, ended July 9, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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wonderfully written thanks for the entry and good luck
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Keep writing what you feel, whether pain, joy, anger, love, hate, and you'll surely write more fine poems like this one. A pleasure to read.
David Michaels
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This poem has a message we can all relate to. It is vary cool and might some revisions but besides that i loved it. PUT MORE POEMS ON SOON!!!!!!!
*peace*
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