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[ I look into those deeply loving eyes. ]

I look into those deeply loving eyes.
And I know the true meaning of being alive
I feel you touch so warm and true
I thank God that I'm in love with you

As we start to kiss, my dream dies
And I wake up with tears in my eyes
Ther is no one beside me in the bed
Only thoughts of you swim around my head.

I remember you laugh; cheerish you smile
But I only knew you for a little while
Eventhough it was a dream, it didn't feel wrong
Because I had a place I could Truly belong.

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I'm 15....

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  • Shacadia Shay
    May 3, 2007

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    this is fantastic a few grammar & spelling errors but this is great. i can easily relate & i think a lot of others could too. best of luck in your love life & in my contest.
    --Blessed be--
    Dark Princess Vampire