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Thanks for the memories ((not the song))

I bow my head

I pray with tears

They try to comfort me

I almost scream in pain

she would have said

Thanks for the memories

Bow your head in saddness

Do not pity me

I am coping in my own way

Do not mess it up

As she would have said

Thanks for the memories

I wish we had one night and one more time

But I thank you mother

Thanks for the memories



Author notes

nope except thanks f.o.b. for making thnks fr th mmrs or i wouldnt have been able to write this

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  • Artemis Gem
    April 24, 2007
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    wow-
    I like that a lot


  • photay.poetry
    April 23, 2007
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    i like the memorie but some meories can be painfull. great write.


  • Cheeseypoof
    April 23, 2007
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    hmmmmmm, kinda a mix with the song I see...lol, but you're skills as a writer have never been questioned in my eyes, I love watching you grow, this piece is short, meaningful, and I'm sure quite a few people can relate, no matter which way they take this poem I love it T....Keep writing. I love you!


  • EverybodysLover
    April 22, 2007
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    i think both your poem and the song are aswome.


  • Victus
    April 20, 2007

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    This is a good write. I like how you ended it, and I feel as though I know it personally. Well done.
    -+ Malik

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