I recall clearly that very first day
when you whispered how much, I took your breath away
your words have since, embedded in my heart
and from it's midst, will never part.
I remember the first time
you looked lovingly at me
where your blue eyes sparkled
in love's intensity.
Your sweet words of love
revolve in my head
which I wake to each morning
and again, take to bed.
I will never forget
what it is, you did to me
when I first fell for you
and your beauty, did see.
I know in my heart
that I found the truest love that day
for ever since and counting
you still steal my breath away.
I find it so hard to even breath at times
just in thinking of you
for there's so much I need to say
and so much more, I want to do.
I have never stopped loving you
and hence, I never will
for living without your love
would be a lethal pill.
Author notes
option..
!Option 2.) If it be a Poem of Love Found, Show me the Emotions of that.
A contest entry
- Lost Love, Found Love Show me Both!! by Shadow Seraphim.
649 points, ended April 29, 2007, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very emotional poem. This is great to read such a wonderful poem. I am enthralled and I love the way you have used the words to portray a picture from your ideas. Long time since you have visited mine dear. My page longs for your visit. Good Day
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Wow you have expressed some deeply vivid emotions here Bella. An excellent sincere geartfelt piece of poetry expresing how deeply your feelings run for another. A beautiful piece of poetry... an emotionasl piece also.
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Brava Brava You have Captitived me with your words, I love the feelings in this poem, the Flow is wonderful, So Full of Emotion, I really Love this one, Thank you So much for entering it, it is what I look for ,of Option 2. Thank you and just one thing "breath" in line 26 should be spelled "breathe" in the way you have written the line.
x-Midnight Vixen-x
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