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Intertwine

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Isn't it enough that we have each other ?
Doesn't the moment that we have
count for anything ?
Here we are in the night with a beautiful moon,
And the love we have is very special,
Don't spoil it,
Please...
think before you say anything,

Isn't enough that we gave up everything ?
Can we forget the loved ones we lost ?
Standing here
with the stars above,
Illuminating our joy,
Don't question it,
Surrender,
Feel the love we share,

Whisper through those joys
touching in completeness,
nourish those needs
forever met,
And if you meet my eyes,
I will meet yours,

Hearts reaching out,
Seeking other,
Blending desires, hopes and dreams,
Nectar once tasted,
Sustains us,
If your hand reaches out
I will grasp yours,

So in this we intertwine,
Meeting hand in hand,
Holding on to tomorrow,
Celebrating the completness that we have,
And in the beginning
the question is this,
Where do we go from here ?

By: B.E. Whitehorn & Kerri Stoetzel

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Written January 4th, 2002

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  • August 31, 2004
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    wow this is touching. Love is such an amazing feeling and youve captured a part of it that is so hard to express.


  • candy177
    May 9, 2004
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    This is so beautiful...your imagery is amazing...and to think, on the first poem I clicked I found a line I just fell in love with
    Here we are in the night with a beautiful moon,
    so beautiful...(damn does this sound like a canned comment - I hope so, I'm just at a slight loss for words!)...love is such a beautiful thing..

  • WranglerSteve gold member
    January 27, 2004
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    WOW, this is simply amazing. Just so well written. I'm having problems thinking of anything else to say about it, it's just that good. So, thank you so very much for sharing your words and experiences with all of us here.


  • Kate-the-Shrew
    September 18, 2003
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    ohhhh....that is SO romantic really a very lovely moving piece. Thanks so much for letting me read this and thanx also for the comment!!!!

    --"Kate-the-Shrew"


  • Manicmuze
    January 5, 2002
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    Nicely done... its wonderful to be able to need each other and give to each other in this way... Enjoyed this, thanks much!


  • sidewinder silver member
    January 5, 2002
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    Thank you both for the very kind words !
    I'm glad you enjoyed the read !


  • Einstein on Crack
    January 5, 2002
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    Heavenly words ... Andy


  • January 4, 2002
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    Very well done, loving!

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