Thousands of years before history
when civilisation began,
there lived an intelligent race of people
who could be the ancestors of man.
Their knowledge was far superior
to anything we know now,
and everything we have achieved
is because they have shown us how.
They lived in a place called Atlantis
I'm told by a reliable source,
but you really don't have to believe it
for it's only a legend of course.
A contest entry
- Super Quickie - Inside 30 Minutes by Ryno.
300 points, ended April 20, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shorter The Better! by My Darkness.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well you have misspelled civilization, and this piece seems to be more of a history lesson than anything.. it is short, but just not what i'm looking for.. thanks for entering
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Good rhymes and a really enjoyable topic. I liked this. Had good flow, also. Thank-you for entering my contest and for sharing. Best wishes!
~Ryan~ -
A great write with a good rhythm to it. It also made me smile. Good luck in the contest.
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