My mind is in need of a change
That is a change of subject
I want to release the stress
And just allow my mind to wander
Freely like a bird in the sky
I think my thoughts would like to go
Somewhere on ths sick, dirty side of town
There might be something good
For me at the end of this trip
I guess I need a guide
All I have to do is find one
To lead me on this trip of
Pleasure on the dangerous wild side
Author notes
i have one...thank goodness...lol j/k
A contest entry
- Super Quickie - Inside 30 Minutes by Ryno.
300 points, ended April 20, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good writing. The flow was a little rigidy, but it had a good topic and worded to it's advantage. Good works. Thank-you for entering my contest and for sharing! Best wishes!
~Ryan~ -
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very good!
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nice, fast, Simply Great. Awesome Job sis keep it up. You have me eagerly awaiting a new one.
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Everyones mind wants to be at rest especially those loaded down with such heavy burdens. i like this poem keep up the good work
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