“Who’s there?”
“Don’t worry young man
for it is me, the Rabbit
of White & Porphyry?”
“Mr.Rabbit for I am
lost in this abyss, confusion
has mislead the wits of my
keen sense.”
“Come close Boy, my
comfort cannot be
reached by the most
loving of mothers.”
“Your fluff is tough on
my nose but one whiff
and I’ve seem to remember
the stream I‘ve followed her
and its near, I know it
come here let me smell
your snow white deliciousness.”
“With no regret my friend
until the end ill follow you
but may your nose stay true
to the honest love of yours truly
the Rabbit Porphyry.”
“I will for I’ve already
began to loathe
the length of space between
my face and yours addicted I am
to this, before its even began.”
Author notes
Porphyry is like a crystal type rock. The poems about coke. I figured it kind of worked.
A contest entry
- Super Quickie - Inside 30 Minutes by Ryno.
300 points, ended April 20, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Good idea. Skillful form and flow that you've penned to this and pretty well written. It could've been a little more effective, but I enjoyed it. Good work!
~Ryan~
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