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Scribbled Sentences

Scribbled sentences
of the judicially inept
don drunken robes
with faulty focus.

Innocence erased, replaced
with words...


poetically imprisoned.


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  • Ryno
    April 20, 2007

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    Very interesting ans skillful last lines that you brought the poem up to, like the dawning. Interesting idea. Very short, but also completely brilliant. Good work. Thank-you for entering!
    ~Ryan~


  • leander Moderators member
    April 19, 2007

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    I really like the openness of this poem It's short, but it allows the reader to interprete it into so many levels

    A nice touch of poetic devices makes this complete well done!


  • Floorboards
    April 19, 2007

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    excellent

    crikey sheltered, this is excellent, superbly written, very very impressive stuff indeed, good luck!
    Alex.