mixing twirling, spinning twisting—
or is it motionless?
an ebon light
and patterned void
with some irrevocably
irrelevant
irrationality.
genius aspirations
of a poet's own approval:
deep, too deep
and dug so deeply—
it's shallow (yet again),
and beyond
appreciation.
Author notes
"Just because people don't understand your poetry doesn't mean you're too 'deep' for them."
A contest entry
- Super Quickie - Inside 30 Minutes by Ryno.
300 points, ended April 20, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
True?
Comments
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I could not agree more. I absolutely hate it when someone tells me on my poem that the poem is-
"confusing"
"jibberish"
"uncomprehensive"
or just plain
"tooo deep"
bugs me. If it is deep- the all more better, it means you spent much time on it.
On the poem itself- good topic and well thought out voice behind it. The words slur together.
Grand job and good work!
Thanks for entering!
~Ryan~
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