sometimes you get on my nerves
and i absolutely can't stand you
but you know i love you still
even after what we've been through
our family is going through a rough patch right now
but i'll always be there if you need me
you can talk to me about anything
and this i guarantee
i can't stand to see you like this
when you're sad and don't talk much
i know what you're going through
and i'm here to be your crutch
when you wake up in the middle of the night crying
i'll be there for you always
and i'll be there to keep you company
on those nice sunny days
mom might not always be nice to you
and i might not be that nice either
but in our hearts we love you
just sometimes, we need to stop and take a breather
we don't mean to hurt you
and i don't like it when i realize i do
just remember that we're there for you
we love you, and together, we'll make it through
A contest entry
- Sibling Love by Abidoodle333.
700 points, ended April 28, 2007, 13 entries
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great job
i liked it a lot
thanx for entering good luck
Abidoodle
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i feel the same way. sometimes i want to totally ignore me sister becasue i want to be alone, but if she really needs me i no i'll be there for her. great poem this is my favorite verse:
i can't stand to see you like this
when you're sad and don't talk much
i know what you're going through
and i'm here to be your crutch
great job!
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I really empathise with this one too, this is just how I feel about my sister!
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awwwwwwwww ! did you show her this yet , its awesome
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no i didn't show it to her, she doesn't need to see it
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