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To the Lady I See Every Day on the Skywalk, a Declaration of Esteem

Damn, girl, what would it take
To tap that ass?
Bang your forehead against the headboard?
Tug on your hair?
Bite your shoulder?
Grab your wrists?
Slap your cheeks red?
Slide my hands down your thighs?
Grab your ankles?
Shove you off?
Flip you over?
Pounce on you?
Lick your teeth?
Kiss your collarbone?
Then spend, and spend, and spend all over that sweaty, flushed face?

Cuz I think you're kinda cute.

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Written July 18th, 2003

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  • MyxFallenxAngel
    January 9, 2008
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    lmfao! totally hilarious! good job and keep it up!

  • Oh Ruffian
    June 26, 2006
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    Yet again... fantastic. Sex (and cocksucking) should always be treated with absolutely absurdity, or at least that's what Jack Spicer would think.


  • Silence of Finality gold member
    June 5, 2006
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    I liked this poem because here you've put down into poetry what so many men and women think on a daily basis. Good for you!!!


  • shattered inoccents
    January 31, 2005
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    lol

    I liked this poem...me being a girl...more of a drity one this appealed to me a lot. good work


  • candy177
    March 26, 2004
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    Definitely perverse...right up my alley LOL. I can just imagine what would happen if you actually went up to a woman and said all this...with any luck you'd get your ass kicked haha. (Unless of course, she knew you and wanted this too ) What an imaginative write...every day on the skywalk sheesh lol


  • B2oH
    January 20, 2004
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    Perversely Humorous

    Ah, somethings best left unspoken reverberate inside one's head. This is a clever little piece that plays off the title (or visa versa - whatever) and enlarges on the theme of casual admiration until the finishe portrait threatens to cover part of the wall.

    The humor is perverse, but I happen to appreciate it. Well done.


  • InxomniaXpiral
    January 15, 2004
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    um, the feminist in me wonders why you would want to do that to her face. . .but the nympho lesbian in me wonders "shit, how long before my girlfriend gets home?" great poem, kinda hot i like your sense of humor.

    SSB


  • PurpleSky
    December 31, 2003
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    well then.......... So you like the rough stuff huh?


  • film noir
    July 28, 2003
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    hmmm....this peace is yummy. i really enjoy it. thanks for sharing it.
    keep it up, my friend!!!!!!!

    -Queen of the Damned aka Allissia Renee


  • Tiffany
    July 18, 2003
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    very cool poem and very long title! not much to say about it, i just like it!!

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