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The Golden Path

I see the magic
The sun set is high in the sky
I see the magic that’s in this path
I see the fairies sing and dance
I know it’s a long path ahead
But I know what I have to do
I will get out from this dark place
And enter a world of light
I want to touch the golden sand
I want to be able to see the open sky

No one can stop me from going
My soul will be free
It will not be flagged by evil
The sun will touch my skin
It will make me glow with happiness
I will finally be able to dance
With all the mythical creatures of the light

This is the path ahead
I will go
And I won’t regret
The evil spirits can’t hold me back
No, not today
I will be freed from this dark forest
This forest of evil and sadness
It can’t hold me back
Not today
Nor ever…

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    This is a great piece here I love the imagery in this piece, well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen

  • gayshogun
    April 19, 2007
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    real poetry I hate stupid shit that focases on rymin