You do not speak
Yet I hear you
Your soul sending messages
to mine
Every word sinking deep
enforcing my sense of belonging
Do you hear my sighs as I breathe you in
filling my being with your presence
I am lost in my thoughts of you
finding solace as they reveal themselves
Embracing the vibration of your voice
holding it close to my heart
I have set myself aside for you
Waiting your return
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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This was such a sweet poem. The emotions were strong and the sense of total surrender to your love was evident. I also enjoyed the way you worded things, it was unique and refreshing when compared to the usual love poems. Excellent job, keep it up!
~NeverLoseHope
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No. I honestly don't remember any of this. But, it sounds cool! Three bunnies!
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Exquisite & elegant. The unspoken messages are usually the most cherished ones. Well done, as always Noreen
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Very nicely done, eloquent in its penning, soft in it's read and my pleasure as always to read! This has an allure to it when you begin and that continues throughout to the end. Excellent work
~Tia
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awwww....I just want to give you a great big hug
and I can feel the bittersweet emotion penned in this luvly write...you go girlfriend!
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Nice... wordless expression precedes vocal expression. Great write. Has got me thinking.
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This speaks on many levels; the area of romance in a physical world, the realm of spiritual closeness that we find with others, also as some belief/object that we hold dear. The messages echo delves deeply to find its home.
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great job
I love you're writing! it speaks to me because i think we've all been there before if we've ever been in love, ya know? you wrote what we've all thought before in love, in a beautiful way. thanks for the great read! -
soft words of love
Loved the line, set yourself aside for you, thats sweet and shows real love waiting to be shared.Delight to read.
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And What messages these leave one with!! So soft and beautiful! Sometimes those Unspoken Messages are the best! They can say sooooo much! And mean the most! I love this one!!! Great job on this one!
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aww...I like this very much! A deeply romantic "pining" type of piece is always welcome. Lovely, thank you!
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