New life springs forth in glorious display
Nature's gentle kiss awakens beauty
Transformation is nature's great duty
Bringing forth life in such a peaceful way
Blooms slowly open on majestic trees
Soon to be fruit for all life to enjoy
Beautiful splendor sets my soul free
Radiant colors fill my eyes with joy
Reds, greens, and yellows dance in the sunlight
Birds sing in unison, a peaceful song
Spreading feathered wing, about to take flight
To find food and rest from a journey so long
Nature's masterpiece painted with glory
A breathtaking sight in God's own glory
A contest entry
- Sing Me A Sonnet In Spring... by poet2angels.
625 points, ended April 30, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - can you write a sonnet? (for prewrites) by rexi and eso.
300 points, ended April 24, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - By Invite Only by Heavens Child.
550 points, ended May 2, 2007, 27 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SONNET PREWRITES ... Surprise me! by Emerald Lass.
475 points, ended September 9, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Smiling...
Lovely!
Sweet write, much talent displayed and appreciated here. 
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A truly beautiful sonnet. You've have penned some amazing imagery with brilliant wording. I love spring, in embodies the coming to life of nature and you've done a wonderful work putting it on paper. Thank you for the entry in my contest.
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Dear Amy
A beautiful sonnet indeed,
To honor the season of spring,
Flowers bloom from their seed,
And the sun shines on everything.
Your poem captures the beauty of life so well at this wonderful time of year. Again, I am in awe of your exceptional talent.
Hugs and love,
Petratani
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Very ambitious! I have never written a sonnet.
This stanza is especially lovely:
"Blooms slowly open on majestic trees
Soon to be fruit for all life to enjoy
Beautiful splendor sets my soul free
Radiant colors fill my eyes with joy"
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a great write i had enjoy reading it , good luck
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Great write man i like how it puts nature into life as if tree's and flowers were a animal hope you right much more ^.^
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lovely!
Perfect form and touches of nature and faith make this a beautiful Sonnet!
"Blooms slowly open on majestic trees
Soon to be fruit for all life to enjoy
Beautiful splendor sets my soul free
Radiant colors fill my eyes with joy"
So lovely!
Lynda
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