I gave you my heart and soul
Knowing that everytime I adore my eyes with your dreams
Heaps of those broken dreams will pain and make me cry.
Many times I thought of making you feel my heart
How impatiently it beats in your love
I thought of blowing all your sorrows with me like storm.
Stormy wind, fragranced breeze, soothing rain
All are different identities of me in your love
I tried to move you, to make you feel the ecstasy I feel in your love
But all my efforts go vain
I've never been any where cold as you.
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent
This poem is so very astutely written. It is a fantastic expression of all that you have come to know and feel for this person. Though it is not the kind of outcome we want when we give our heart, it is one way that we grow to know what it is we desire in a person that we love. Sometimes, we need to see when a person isn't right for us. Wonderful writing here. ***Ivy Rose
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