I hate you
for treating me like shit,
for believing that you're better,
for being better.
I hate you
for making me honestly believe
that the latter is true.
I hate you
for betraying my trust,
for humiliating me,
for confiding in me.
I hate you
for saying you love me,
for depending on me,
for making me love you,
totally dependent on our relationship.
I hate you
for making jokes,
for singing badly with me,
for the million smiles we share.
I hate you
for fucking up afterwards like you always do.
I hate you
for blaming me,
for turning everyone against me,
including myself.
I hate you
for causing my laugh lines,
for causing my scars.
I hate you
for encouraging me,
for beaming at my accomplishments,
for tearing me down at one mistake.
I hate you
for taking out your anger on me
when you secretely hate your boss.
I hate you
for being a hypocrite,
for bitching about my faults
when they are the same as your own.
I hate you for being you.
I hate you for making me...
for making me be your clone.
Author notes
Dedicated to mother...
Comment if you wish; I'm not gonna twist your arm.. or am I?
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wow I really like this you have talent. I can relate to just about every line..It's like my feelings for my mom write here. I'm amazed how you captured how I feel exactly in this poem. remember they can't make you who they want you to be you can make your own choices and you can be better than them.this really is a great piece and I hope that everything works out for you
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I am really feeling this write, it's like you're saying I hate you for all the bad times we had, and for all the good times we had. Your work is really inspirational. I've been in a writer's block for some time and I'm telling you, your work makes me want to write. Thanks for that, and thanks for posting.
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"for causing my laugh lines, for causing my scars." I love this. Has some great emotion behind it
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Speechless
Wow, this is truly amazing. You did such a wonderful job that it left me speechless. It relates to my life, with a few different people, but the result is still the same. Which is what you described here. I have no clue how you were able to find the words but you did it perfectly. Amazing. Breathtaking at how this matches peoples lives so well. The way you said I hate you so many times, both for the good things and for the bad is so understandable. You tend to hate them for the good things because it makes you feel like maybe you dont need to hate them anymore but then they build you up just to be able to tear you down again.
Great job and extremely unbelievable.
~Felicity~
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you are only a clone cause you don't let go, the hardest thing for all us mortal to do, is to let go and forgive. you know i think i am a clone of a few ppl i dislike. but this is a strong poem. the word hate keeps showing up and that sends out the message clear, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing
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