Filter out the smog of cities you’ve once lived in
As you put on your new *supersonic*-halo-
Those rings of fire can’t compare, baby,
To the fire (inside) of me, clenching fists so tightly
Winged apparitions in the sky above
As I solely wind my way through memories of love
Cottoncandy clouds *bloom* like blossoms in the sunset
As we try to find what we are looking for
[Or what we’re holding on to]
I’m now happy, for once in my pathetic-life
So don’t ruin it for me; I’ll snap on you
Blood running /cold/ in the studio-room
Soon to be on the cover of that magazine in Ur hand
That chic London volume is my ultimate-goal
To be immortalized in .p.r.i.n.t. and picture
*Snap-snap-snap* goes the camera; M&M binge
Lovely shadows and amaranth-ringed whims
Clothes cling tightly as I tear up the runway
I’m almost on my way to supermodel-stardom
Jeffree and Davey are my closest companions
Barhopping is our hobby; flesh doused with glitter
You could never again compare me to the boy I once was...
Author notes
hope you like it kids!!!
A contest entry
- Clinic Paranoia and A Touch of Pretty Heroin by anima bella.
400 points, ended April 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
a poem about being a model....tell me what you think!
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Ahhh. Jeffree Starr and Davey Havok. I adore this!
This is amazing. My favorite part is:
"Those rings of fire can’t compare, baby,
To the fire (inside) of me, clenching fists so tightly
Winged apparitions in the sky above
As I solely wind my way through memories of love
Cottoncandy clouds *bloom* like blossoms in the sunset
As we try to find what we are looking for
[Or what we’re holding on to]
I’m now happy, for once in my pathetic-life
So don’t ruin it for me; I’ll snap on you"
This is very beautiful and combines such visual words.
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OMIGOD BBYDOLL
jefree star and davey havok *drools*
AHH darling.. this is awesome!
xoxo
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b.b.baby face;;
As I solely wind my way through memories of love
Cottoncandy clouds *bloom* like blossoms in the sunset
As we try to find what we are looking for
[Or what we’re holding on to]
darling;;
your words make me drool.
you're amazing sugarcakes..
simply astounding.
♥
-your Queen
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"supersonic halos" I Love That.
"Winged apparitions in the sky above
As I solely wind my way through memories" And
"To be immortalized in .p.r.i.n.t. and picture
*Snap-snap-snap* goes the camera; M&M binge"
Such a wicked poet♥
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Awh darling that was amazing!
Jeffree and Davey are my closest companions
I love them both!
So don’t ruin it for me; I’ll snap on you
Blood running /cold/ in the studio-room
Soon to be on the cover of that magazine in Ur hand
I love those lines. You have such a way with word hun.
xoxo,
Your Dumpster Doll -
So don’t ruin it for me; I’ll snap on you
Blood running /cold/ in the studio-room
Soon to be on the cover of that magazine in Ur hand
That chic London volume is my ultimate-goal
To be immortalized in .p.r.i.n.t. and picture
*Snap-snap-snap* goes the camera; M&M binge
L.l.l.la la la love IT!!!
B.babey Doll you,you,you,
are just AMAZING!!!!!!
And your work always is just....
just...
(doll.You.Make.Me.Moan)
♥Love♥ your mistress
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oh wow!
greatness!
davey? havok, from afi?
coolness!
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Filter out the smog of cities you’ve once lived in
As you put on your new *supersonic*-halo-
Those rings of fire can’t compare, baby,
amazing opening lines.
&& absolutely stunning imagery.
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Jeffree and Davey are my closest companions
Barhopping is our hobby; flesh doused with glitter
You could never again compare me to the boy I once was...
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This is a good piece, I like the way you have presented it. Bet that anyone who is or wants to be a model will really enjoy this. Thanks for sharing and keep your creativity flowing!! James.
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wow! you have penned a wonderful piece, and described being a model so vividly. great use of punctuation, you have not overdone it, like so many people (including me
) do. great write!
lucy
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