The lights go down the movie begins,
we huddle closer, feeding each other Haagen Daaz,
guilty passion, pleasurable sins,
this evening is most definitely ours.
When you called you said "put on a skirt",
I chose a short dress in candy pink,
I fondle your breasts through your shirt,
from the seats we begin to sink.
Lips meeting as your hand slides up,
the length of my smooth sunkissed leg.
Your bare nipple in my mouth I cup,
take me now, I breathlessly beg.
Your fingers stroke my aching mound,
then finally thrust deep inside,
your clitoris now my mouth has found,
my dripping pussy opens wide.
Thrusting, panting, humping madly,
people getting up to go,
us two grinning oh so gladly,
hope that you all enjoyed the show.
A contest entry
- BREAKING THE LAW by soldiersoul.
600 points, ended April 30, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice, nice, very nice!
LOL! Loved it, reminded me of the first time that a girl friend went...well you know, in a theater. Got to watch out for those "Good Girls." Ah sweet memories. Thanks for a good write.
Eyec
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Hot write here
I liked the rhyme. Was this about anyone in particular
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All the best
Pozo
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nice one that the one place i haven't had sex in. but its sound like a good a good place. lol. i was closed one time it didn't happen aww sigh
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Wonderful piece of titilation and sensual romance in 'forbidden' places hehe, well done and if true to life, well, way to go hehe but be careful! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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Thank you so much for your comment, I enjoyed writing this. Though it is purely fantasy
unfortunately. Best wishes
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Used to do this at the drive in in the car, but without them any more, I guess this is the next place to go. Naughty, naughty!
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Lol, the drive in was probably a better place as it was more private! We don't have drive in's in England though and as far as I know we never have
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welcome to the contest u law breaker u...hey at the price of candy n popcorn by god the show best be OSCAR quality and the surround sound turned up fer the whole theater to shake
...good luck in the contest...n hey stop putting yer chewin gum under the seat dammit lol
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Hey man are u deaf or sumthin? I know they heard my orgasm in the foyer
Sorry bout the gum did it stick to your pants, or is that something else just by your pocket?
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Very naughty! LOL
Sounds like a fun night, but I bet you missed the film!!
Thanks for the cool entry!
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