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Light At The End of The Tunnel

They'll be an embroided black and white world until you reach your destination
When minds penetrate to oversee a new beginning they'll be people
in the same light standing under the suns of some fortunate
Days will be lucky without the dark, overseas for the suns joy
They'll be people standing tall, glimpsed happy, all wonderful
You can keep a bucket and fill your heart in it
You can imagine how this moment felt when the motion was
too heavy to fill the bucket itself as when it poured -
everyone felt different, like a never before experience
something new was coming and they had to captivate it.

The world said 'you can knock me down like dominoes'
and we agreed to wait in patience, we forseen some existence
We couldn't wait to discover living without the broken benches and arches
We were to run free when we were inspired, looking out we saw beauty.
It was like a never before new experience and we were to unravel the happening.
Something new became talk and influential, numbered or not
'It was like' they all said: 'it was like there was light at the end of the tunnel'

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Light can make your life a new colour

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    April 23, 2007

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    This is a great piece, I love the imagery and the story you wove into this piece... well done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen