I closed the door behind << me
Leaving it un[lock]ed
A--b r i d g e--not yet ~b~u~r~n~ed
Should there be a reason to go (( kcab ))
Safety and comfort are > mini < mum
No crowd -{ holds }- a familiar face
Each day is an
((E))((C))((H))((O))
In a < over
whelm > ing place
!!F!!rustration follows the morning's dew
Tears
f
a
l
l in the night
E.a.c.h. and e.v.e.r.y. effort
Feels like a (-point*less) plight
Fear consumes <<<< hope |
But each day goes_______ on_______>
Cuz even though the ;;nights;; are :: dark ::
There's always another
\ \ / /
___( dawn )___
Author notes
Unique style, unlike my usual. Unfortunately some of the HTML coding on this site made me have to change it around a bit... Grrr...
A contest entry
- Show me how it all ends. by tragicallyGifted.
1750 points, ended April 22, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hmm... THis is very far from your usual style. I love it though.
Nice little twist of having an ending of each day to signify a beginning of a new one. Very unique thought indeed.
Great job on this.
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