Bare this soul, a hushed melody
Of everlasting tranquility
Where strings of heart hum a tune
Amongst the stars in warmth of June
Soft whispers linger on love's breath
Just one more kiss, then I shall rest
Moonbeams glide the midnight sky
Jasmine's scent of pleasured high
In slumber keep, where dreams I take
Hold tight, this love, don't let me wake
No hollow place nor barren land
No more evils that do demand
Just one more kiss, that's all I seek
Eyes shut tight, trembling, weak
For heaven, is where I long to be
In your arms, with tranquility
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Oh Autumn, I can so relate to so much of this. I feel the pain you have portrayed in this poem. Hope you get to feeling all better soon hon.
I've got lots of catching up to do.
Loves ya bunches
Vickie
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Not as much catching up as you think Vickie. Writing has been rather difficult for a while. Thanks for the commentst sweetie.
Storm
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Magnificent Ending
Dear StormGoddess,
Such a romantic you are with this poem. However, I doubt that any woman is truly satisfied with one more kiss! (It's like that potato chip - no one can eat just one)
Loved the poem,
Tang
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Thank you Tang. I suppose we would always want yet one more after the last one more, but hey, what can I say?? Kisses are such a beautiful thing. Appeciate the comments sweetie.
Storm
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Wow tis a great sad write
This reaches out to touch the heart of the reader, and bring a tear to the eye, this is so well crafted and with such emotions, great job, Blessings John
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Thank you John, appreciate your comments.
Storm
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Ah Storm this is so soft and beautiful. The sadness just weeps from each line. Your gentle spirit and beautiful heart shines so brightly in this write. Be well my friend and continue to thrive and persevere. Even through what life throws, stand and be strong.
Jeannie
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Thank you Jeannie. Just a bit of the old fashioned lover in me, lol. Appreciate your comments hun.
Storm
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My friend,
This is a truly beautiful write!
"For heaven, is where I long to be;
in your arms, with tranquility"...some beautiful lines
All the best to you!
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Thank you Sandy, appreciate it.
Storm
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