she's everywhere
i want to be
she's just
better than me
i want this
she's got it
i want to be
she's already there
she's better than me
i want a bf
she's got one
i hate homework
her's is done
she'll always be
better than me
where ever i go
i know
she's been there
done that
she is
and willalways be
BETTER THAN ME!!
A contest entry
- oogaboogashoogalooga...this is serious by Starlette.
525 points, ended December 7, 2007, 150 entries
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I know how you feel...it's kinda how it is for me too...everyone I've liked...has liked my best friend first...everything I want...she seems to get it first...every where I go...I hear someone talking about how perfect she is. I love this write!
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aww that is sad. i can relate though. great write. it is a very amazing piece
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This can happen to so many people. Just think, there is probably someone thinking that you're better than them. You just have to let go, and except your boundaries and limitations. And if you do that you'll end up on top. It was good write and excellent rhyme scheme
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This is so true for almost ever women in the world. Great and very truthful write. Keep up the super work sweety =] Kudos!
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Very nice write. I believe you are right and especially in women they always feel someone is better than they are. I always feel like that: "I want to be like her". Never I'm glad to be me.
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great write
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Iam sure that there are somethings that you are better at. I love the poem and totally understand how you feel
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ur better than me =O
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i highly doubt she's better than you at everything. there are certain talents, abilities, and capacities that you can achieve and she might not ever have the chance. i'm sure there are plenty of things you have that she doesn't and i'm pretty sure she wants them. just because somebody had all the things you want doesn't mean she's better by any means and i think this poem proves that you are pretty much amazing yourself. anyway, i like the poem, but when i read it, it seems like you have more you want to say. you don't have to change it, it just seems to flow in a way that suggests there's a lot of hidden emotion. I just think you should know that it's ok to just have a moment and splurge even if no one hears it or sees it. you're entitled to your feelings, don't be afraid to let it out because it will eat you up inside. good luck
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thanx and i love that "splurge". tho i have no idea wat it means.
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it means that you are great and you do have a lot going for you and just because you don't have what someone else does, doesn't mean you don't have a lot to offer. be proud of yourself and love youself for the things you can do instead of hating yourself for the things you can't.
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