Your sleeping lower lip
and my staring glances at you, slumped
and bobbing as the bus stops and goes
I would kiss you hello.
But then I would cease to be the girl
who watched you and loved you
while you were sleeping.
Who you will never know.
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Creepy.
Please tell me what you think
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ahhh, I have often beentempted by the urge to just kiss sweet rasberry lips petulant in sleep near me on any lazy afternoon, some fair haired lovely dreamer, but I would be
ostracized for such an act, so I simply merge with her through imagination, and savor a bit of bliss with the girl I'll never know....nice to know girls have the same response sometimes to charming sleepers. great write~~Artis
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lol just a tabd bit creep, but makes a lovely poem doesn't it. it's cute and short and made me smile really, hehe. Nothing else I can really say about it, love the detail in it though
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SOO cute
i love this.
i dont know what to say...i know how this feels?
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creepy yes, haha, but also, a great poem. and really cute.
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I like it.
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Yes, stlkaer-like thoughts come to my head, too. But I think everyone has those thoughts.
I hope. *gulp*
Love the last line.
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