Whenever I close my eyes
I envision your beautiful face
where my heart starts to call to your's
to join me, in this heavenly place.
I can feel your arms around me
holding me close, and tight
where in serenity, I feel at home
and my fears, all take to flight.
I can see your resplendent smile
reminding me, oh so much
how I miss your words of love
and long to feel your touch.
I can feel your gentle touch
sending shivers, all over my skin
where in the sweetest euphoria
I am wrapped within.
I can see the love, in your beautiful blue eyes
sparkling brightly for all to see
filled with the deepest devotion
of a love, that's meant to be.
I can feel your celestial aura
embedded within my soul
where as a part of you
I feel, completely whole.
I love you more than life itself
and would do anything so you can see
that you are the one and only
man there is, for me.
Author notes
option 4.
A contest entry
- Heaven is Crying, the Angels Caught You Cheating....Or did they??? by PassionsPromise.
550 points, ended April 25, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah... Sweet Love
what are we without love?
Love Love don't go away
Come to me everyday...
I realy loved your poem
Great write
Blessings
Vibiesh
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WOW. This is indeed a lovely piece. Thanks somuch for such an entry. We wish you the best in this contest.
Vsutton
* i really enjoyed the rythmn of this one, the imagery, as if you can feel a connection. well done -
a wonderful write full of emotion
good luck
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Beautiful
A very lovely read indeed, thanks so much for your entry, and all the best in this contest. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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