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An Angel Saved Me

I know this may sound corny,
and you might think its just a joke.
But an angel saved me,
from depression and suicidal dreams.

I came to this site,
just so I could write.
I had no idea anyone cared,
let alone show love to me.

My mother and father in life,
are great people.
But like any child,
I ran from them.

I ran into this angel,
and she held me.
Wiped away any tears,
and kept me calm.

She agreed to take me in,
and adopt me as her daughter.
I love her,
with every ounce of my breath.

Not once has she angered me,
not once saying I was pathetic.
I felt I was pathetic,
and she assured me I'm not.

She is the best,
and just amazing.
I love her,
and she loves me.

Minoo Malik,
you're very dear to me.
And I try my best,
to be myself around her.

I love you,
because you don't judge me.
And you understand me,
and love me.

My angel is watching me,
she tends to my wounds.
She shows her love,
as she tries to keep me from harm.

Mom, I love you,
always and forever.
I will always remember,
that an angel saved me.

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04/18/07 11:04 pm

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  • Sugarcooky42
    April 20, 2007

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    This is so sweet

    We all have our angels and Im so glad you found one of yours. You express your love so honestly and freely that it cannot help but touch the heart. And yes you do write with a wisdom beyond your years. Wonderfull!


  • imperfectperfection
    April 19, 2007

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    Beyond this Universe

    That's my silly girl This is such a heartfelt poetry dedicated to me that makes me feel complete. Sweetheart, it's not at all me, it's you who makes it very easy and comfortable for others to just love you for what you are. Though I do write sometimes, but this has definitely put at the spot where I'm lost of words. Silly I'm just an average person who has done nothing, but you sure make me feel way more than good and give me credit way more than I deserve. But I'll take it now, look what you made me do...absolutely wonderful write that is oozing with pure untainted love of a little angel - you....love you unlimited Mom


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 19, 2007

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    i love this one, you did a great job my friend, this was something grand, keep it flowing my friend, keep it flowing