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[ As the blood drips upon these keys ]

As the blood drips upon these keys
I say my goodbyes to you
I can no longer live this life
I give up, My Love, I'm through

I thought that you loved me
Would protect my fragile heart
But I realize now
That you lied from the start

I've only hung on this long
To avoid the dissapointment in your eyes

But all of my smiles

Were nothing but lies

 

The love I have for you

Has been my strength to go on

But, it's been shattered and torn

Since you are now gone

 

I've lost everything I have

And everyone I love

I think the time has come

To be welcomed above

 

So as the blood drips upon these keys

Hear my goodbyes to you

For I can no longer live this life

I give up, My Love, I'm through

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Feeling a bit blue today!

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  • stilllake
    July 14, 2007

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    Morbid, indeed!

    very sad, very clear the intention
    the rhyming is simple, love, above... clichés...,
    though sometimes necessary to say what you want to say, I guess

  • who cares...
    April 19, 2007

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    WOW

    THATS REELY GOOD! . . I LUV IT! . . I FIL THE EXACT SAME WAY . . EXCEPT . . IM NOT GOIN 2 HEAVEN . . IM GOIN 2HELL . .


    • DenyMyLove
      April 19, 2007
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      Thank you for commenting! I'm sorry that you relate! And we can all go to Heaven!