The voices are calling again
telling me this is not the end
one more time I must draw back the blade
this is a demon they cry
the demon must die, must die
or if you do not do your job
it will kill again
It is extremely hard to do
as they look human
how can i possibly do this?
The voices will not stop
they tell me this is the last one
I know they are lying
I need help, but where will I go?
They will all think I'm crazy
All I want is for the voices to stop
Maybe they are telling the truth this time
maybe this is the last one and they will stop
All I want is for the voices to be quiet
To stop them from screaming I draw back the blade
and delve it into the demon again
I've done this countless times before
it is so easy now
The warm blood covers my hand
and the voices are silent once again
Author notes
Written July 18th, 2003
A contest entry
- blood, guts, gore by mannyz143.
250 points, ended July 29, 2003, 13 entries
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HAHAH
THIS IS SOOOO SADISTIC AND EVIL AND CREEPY! I LOVE IT! A true write on insanity indeed!
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You could take this both from a "realistic" (aliens:The Movie kinda real) or from a more metaphorical standpoint. Both work but searching for meaning in the darkness does not leave the reader empty handed.
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ooo, i know where this idea came from. That movie with.... shit. I'm having a brain fart. Nvm then. It was really a good one. thanks for the pleasure of reading it. enjoy life.
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awesome!
\/\/o\/\/. Okay.. Man.. Wow. This is so powerful. I love the style of this write.. It's absolutely amazing. I'm not quite positive of the motive of this, but it sounds like a suicide at the end.. If it was intended to be that, then AWESOME way of putting it.. If it's simply killing the demons, it still rocks! I like the screaming voices
Good write! And good luck with the contest *growls at my fellow competitor* =)
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whoa!!!!! and i thought that i could get kinda creepy! lol! u blew my creepy stuff outta the water! u did an awesome job and i dunno how i'm gonna judge this contest. it's getting very difficult! lol! well, i'll read more stuff and keep up the great writings.
~mannyz
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