Steel gray eyes below hardened brow
Igniting my desire for humanity now
Towering over me with a hardened body
A drop of nervous perspiration
Splats against my beating breast
A fingertip erect and proud
Traces an imaginary line above my collar bone
Twisting and turning between strands of chestnut brown
A penetrating gaze guiding to uncharted waters
Clinging ever so tightly to the mast...
Author notes
*Quickie 2* 'it's empty tonight'
A contest entry
- Gay & Lesbian Erotica! by SinningSaint.
355 points, ended September 29, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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stunning.
I loved how much passion you got across in this piece with so little wording. the imagery was amazing, it was like watching a movie in my mind's eye. brilliant job.
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I could eat this up ~
Delicious write ~
And I can just imagine this as I sat in the
corner and watch as he twirls his finger through
your *chestnut* fur.....Grrrrr ~
Grammatically tastey piece ~
Forget the sails....prepare the mast for high winds to blow!!!
Papa Bear ~
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Thanks
Glad you liked it
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