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And All Must Die

Itachi must die-
he murdered the clan
but spared only one life
unknowingly two

Sasuke must die-
he turned to the darkness
and darkened the last
Uchiha flame.

I am the instrument
whose mission is clear:
destroy my two brothers
for their crimes against the clan.

And yet, I too must die
for I am to destroy the Uchiha line.

Three Uchiha,
three tamoe,
one Sharingan,
three killers.

And all must die.

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  • Siby Anan
    August 22, 2007
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    You should write a story where Aya kills Itachi, Sasuke kills Aya because he wanted to do it (lol) and then Sasuke kills himself because he's emo...

    Why must Aya destroy the Uchiha line?

    Anyway, fantastic poem. There's just so much...depth to it...


    • Chibi-chan
      August 24, 2007
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      Actually...

      that's a wicked good idea!


      • Siby Anan
        August 24, 2007

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        Why, thank you lolz

        You didn't answer my question >.< Why must Aya destroy the Uchiha line?

        • Chibi-chan
          August 25, 2007
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          Think about it...only a male can continue the Uchiha name, and Aya is a girl, killing the two heirs of the Uchiha clan. Not to mention that she has refused to take part in the "restoration of the clan", as she, like Siena, believes love to be a weakness of mankind. A Juunishi has to rise above such petty feelings...

          But the ultimate beauty of the whole thing is that love is mankind's ultimate strength: look at the way Naruto pushes himself to the brink of death for his precious people. Aya would NEVER do something like that. And the other AMAZING part is that Aya, out of vengeance for her slain clan, ends up becoming its ultimate destroyer. Sad, isn't it?

          That's why I love Aya as a character, and I think, the way I've designed her, she fits so perfectly into the Naruto world: for those two reasons.


  • Artemis Gem
    April 30, 2007

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    interesting...

    aya inspires...a lot in you...O.o
    nice keep ti up!!!
    Megumi is all for Sasuke and Itachi going down...
    She and Deidara are gonna go grab popcorn and teh purple nail polish to watch!!! >.<

    pegleg

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