A Story
Give us a little bit of sunshine
Watch as we grow and play
Give us some pins and a ball
Watch as we knock ‘em down
A joke, a song, a smile
A hug and a dance
A silent moment broken by a laugh
A picture taken
Captures our joy
Captures a moment in our young lives
Give us a little to drink
Watch as we make memories
Give us a game or a movie
Watch as we grow closer
Through heartbreak of many kinds
We stand, lay, cry and move on together
We fight our own battles together as one
A story of strangers
Coming together
And building a family
We all have our own dreams
Now stand back and watch as we achieve them
Author notes
This is for my friends...my family away from my family. I love ya all. ^_^
Please tell me what you think
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I like it, it's a style of writining i'm not use to, i think they call it positivity
in any case it's nice, it's relaxed, it's almost calming just be reading it. Very nicely done
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Ah...how sweet! Another different style of writing. Which is a nice change...I would give this one three applauses...but I used all of mine up on the last poem I read. My favorite lines in this poem would have to be...
"A picture taken
Captures our joy
Captures a moment in our young lives"
Good work...keep it up! Love ya! -
woohoo
This poem realy makes me appriciate them! Must now HUG them!
Thanks for the lovely wright!
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woow
good job.
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A story of strangers
Coming together
And building a family
delicious
it was simple and nice
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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This was a good idea, it needs some work though, more developement.
Good job!
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'tsalright
not really my cup of tea, but i can see many a redeeming quality. my only problem is the use of vocab and rhyming and meter and rhythm etc. step it up please.
that would be all.
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