She lay's there with chains on her arms like
barriers holding her up to the wall
and pinning her down to the lowest level
she sit here and look at the girl sitting
in the little room with Her arms chained to the
wall and not me i look through the mirror in
life and see her sorrow and pain,and i don't
care at all i look at her and see her pain
but i don't care i look at her and see sadness
in her eye's i don't want to know
how she got there i don't want to know why
i just want to make sure i don't end up there
ether with the girl in the mirror that is
crumbled to the ground and the stinging glass
touching the edges of her feet making the floor
go red she is sad the only thing i want to know,
No not know to make sure of is i never get were
she is she came up in the wrong side of the
mirror........................
A contest entry
- Dark and Fantasy Options by Shade Aurelia.
650 points, ended April 20, 2007, 7 entries
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You forgot to put the comment in your author's notes and the option you chose. Otherwise, it's all very good and I enjoyed this. Good luck
Shade -
a bit confusing but it was deep in many ways the girl in the mirror an excellent description. i like your writing.
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