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Words Are M y Paint !

Words Are My Paint

W. Peter Sanci April 18 / 2007


Well I am going to tell you a little story,
About a man who liked to write poems.
He used words like a famous artist uses his
paints.
He was never happy till he got his canvas just
right.
He would think all day long about a poem he
would want to write.
Then like a Michelangelo he would put his
words on his canvas.
These words were his Mona Lisa,

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  • poet2angels gold member
    April 18, 2007

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    lovely!

    I love the comparison with a poem to Mona Lisa....
    Wonderful poem!
    TY so much for entering!

    Lynda

    • Pietro456
      May 1, 2007
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      poet2angels

      Why thsnks for the very kind words about my poem. I like that line as well. It just came to me. Like most of my poems it practically wrote itself. Once again thanks for your very kind words.