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Who Am I?

who am i?
i'm the kind of girl
who will stick up
for my friends

who will try anything new
and have fun doing it
poeple call me weird
but i already know that

people say i'm more like a guy
but i know i am
i mean i have five older brothers
and a older sister

ya, i love to paintball,
go dirt bike riding
with my friend, Cori
play football and bet up the guys

so to sum it up,
i'm just weird,
and love to have fun

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  • lemonhead
    July 13, 2007
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    YEs Very true!! and that why we all love you..... for being yourself and having fun!!


  • Mizuki wolf
    April 26, 2007

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    This is good. It sounds a lot like me. I do almost the same things as you do with my friends. It's so much fun to be wierd instead of being normal. Like people say Being normal is vastly over rated. lol but anywayz, good job, and keep up the good work.


  • purpledragonfly
    April 20, 2007

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    play football and bet up the guys
    hey Tina - don't bet up the guys .... beat 'em up !!!
    LOL wonderful!! MomBetsy


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    April 18, 2007
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    Good Job!

    First off, Great job! So descriptive and so true. I like how you told me most everything that makes up who you are. Though I must ask you to change "drit" to "dirt" in the fourth stanza. Other than that minor mistake, good job. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!


  • PoetBoy2008
    April 18, 2007
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    forgot my applause.


  • PoetBoy2008
    April 18, 2007

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    couldn't have said it better any other way i think it's fine i actually like it you tell people about yourself and how you act in this poem. that has some real meaning to it.

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