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One Blade

protruding from the dry ground
slender and pale green
it's pointed tip turning yellow
waiving slightly in the wind
a dying blade of grass

A contest entry

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  • wishingformars
    April 19, 2007
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    Like it. I had hoped it would be longer, but the shortness works.


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 18, 2007
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    Great imagery in this....
    I love where you went with this...
    TY for entering...

    Luynda


  • jackie08
    April 18, 2007
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    guess what..... i love this poem too
    keep up the good work. you should be a poet. if you want