So lost in confusion
Only questions inside
Trying to clear up my mind
because it’s exhausting me
Unexpected visions
A little spark of hope
I should grab it
But I can’t
I am still trying
to pick up the pieces
of my broken heart
Another scar within
Tomorrow with no meaning
today already gone
Not knowing where I am
or where I am going
Taken a chance
to find my destination
to reach a dream
we once had together
Maybe some day
we laugh about it
as friends can do
But until that time
I suffer in silence
alone...without you
to heal this wounded heart
again.....
Author notes
"the most painful scars are the ones on the inside"--unknown.
Wolf Mistress
In a list
A contest entry
- Blinded Sorrow by EvenStarsBreak--x.
450 points, ended June 3, 2007, 32 entries
Gold trophy winner
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975 points, ended August 21, 2007, 31 entries
Honorable mention
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675 points, ended November 20, 2008, 25 entries
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850 points, ended December 30, 2008, 46 entries
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Comments
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nicely written. the pain is clearly shown and clearly felt. very good job overall.
thanks for entering -
wow. this really hits close to the heart. i loved it.
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very nice write. very sad and painful but full of meaing none the less. Great from start 2 finish. thank you for your entry and best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
andi
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"Tomorrow with no meaning
today already gone
Not knowing where I am
or where I am going"
Aw, this is so sad,
yet so beautiful.
I love the picture you have with this;
it really sets the mood.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
♥
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Gawd, dreadfully sad emotion in this. I love the way you wrote it and the words you used. Flow is awesome, nice write here.
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Wow this is a very sad poem that explains emotion very well. Thanks for adding it to the contest. =]
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wow this i such an amazin poem. so filled with emotion. and a desolate, forsaken, aura. i think you portray the emptions of a breakup amazingly. and for this i congratulate you.
best of luck
~lostelvenchild
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I really like this, and the way you describe the process of getting over a certain bad memory, is something I think we can all relate to. I really like that, and also the poetic way you put this together. I really love this piece.
However, this piece doesn't follow the rules, so I can't consider it in the contest!
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So lovely. A soft and deeply sincere pain, much of what I wish I could have said; though I don't think it would have mattered, at least not now. I have never imagined my life without him. And now that is the only thing I can think about. This is an excellent write. Endearing and powerful use of imagery. This reader was swept away. Thank you so much for your entry!
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Beautiful
i haven't read t his one, h ow could i have missed it. so sad and yet lovely as always you are with your words.
Tasha
xo
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this is beautiful... congrats on the trophy.. i thought you used amazing words, and have really showed me sadness.. great job and good luck!
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Thank you my darkness...I think sadness can bring something up worth reading
Thank you for you wonderful comment
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awww, i'm so close to crying... i love it... it's really full of emotion... good job and thanks for entering my contest... ^-^
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Thank you for the gold, I wished I did not had to write it though because it is sad but true.....
But thnxs again,
take care
XXJeannette
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SO EMOTIONAL
This is just beautiful but really touches the heart on a sad note: I suffer in silence alone...without you to heal this broken heart~wow! thank you so much for sharing
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Thank you for your comment...
Sometimes a picture can inspire the words coming out
And it takes some time to heal a broken heart too
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Awww, how sad and, sadly, something i can very much relate too, far too many times as well! I do suggest a spelling and grammar review, but nothing more than minor techies! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *
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Thank you Lady Your comment meant a lot to me although I am such a clumzy with minor technies grammar....
I just had me gold on it so I think she did not see it neither
XXJeannette
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Oh hun! It makes my eyes fill to think of your pain. You HAVE to hold on. Find yourself again. You are a wonderful, loving and caring woman. Sometimes things don't work out like we hope. So we have to allow ourselves to grieve, regroup, reach out for help if needed, and move forward. Having at least tried is better than not trying at all. Sometimes it just takes a little time for things to happen or work out like they are supposed to. I think maybe it is like picking a fruit before it is ripe, but with a little time it will be ready. Try to look for something good in each day. And hopefully, soon, you will feel better and see things clearer. Your friends are here and there for you.
Jeannie
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You are beautiful........
Thank you Jeannie, I know this will need time..and I know I have tried was better then doing nothing...
And just know your words mean a lot to me, always did...
I know in time it will be okay...but I just don't know how much time that will be....
Thank you for being here hun
Luv ya
XXJeannette
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