thats the simplest way it can be said
im done
done trying to hold on
im letting go
ill let everything fall
fall to the ground and shatter
and this time,
i wont bear to pick up the pieces
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Holy shit.
This is fantastic.
Well done and good luck! -
good write...
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Ty for entering and good luck
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Wow you left no doubt in this poem Thanks for entering the Contest
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I know how you feel, I wrote a poem like this, but it was about giving up hope, and though I'm sure so many people have different feelings of giving up, meaning they are giving up on many different types of things, that this poem can mean something to alot of people, because most people feel like just giving up sometimes, this is well written good job
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very good
I like the poem the emotions it shows match me at times keep em comeing
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