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smile

If you want to change the world
but you're not quite sure how to
just read through these words
and I'll tell you what to do
Go out into the public
and take a look around
look at all the sights
and listen to the sounds
now choose yourself a target
and move a little nearer
keep going till your view of them
is just a little clearer
wait until they look at you
then this is what you do
raise the corners of your mouth
till they look away from you
now I know it may seem silly
and pointless in a way
but if you think about it
you brightned up their day
Maybe it won't change the world
but it's still good to do
cus doesn't it make you feel better
when people smile at you?

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ahh the power of a smile lol

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  • individuality gold member
    March 14, 2008
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    aye it does not hurt to smile at someone and you never know they might smile back and brighten up your own day


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 20, 2008
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    Yes, a smile can open the door to all kinds of things - and there is a real continual affect of smiling, it just keeps on going, and makes one feel a whole bunch better as well. Liked the rhythm, rhyme and flow of these lines and the message you share here.


  • b e a u t i f u l
    February 20, 2008
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    Very cute =] It's true... maybe you're smile is the nicest thing that person has seen all day.

  • individuality gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    your not quite in the seocnd line you are or you're not quite smiles are good yes, we live for them , a good poem.


  • vici377
    February 20, 2008
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    cute and playful

    cute little ditty..with a good rhyme and flow..and some great advice..thanx so much for sharing..


  • forgotten hopes
    October 3, 2007
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    Wow

    yays the greatest thing about this poem is...it made me smile...well done to you my dearest. yays im gonna go smile at people...i do have a massive smile at the mo cos im soooooo happy. i guess i shall see you at x-mas unless i come back for fireworkies on november5th


  • crystal dreams
    May 31, 2007

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    haha you big gay lessa you lol. hows it going me duck i like your lovely new poem here its about time we saw some new poems from you missy lol. soooo me olde mocha its been ages since weve both been on here at the same time not that were on here at teh same time or anything like that but thats not the point. anyway im just going on a bit really, paul is takin ages to get ready what a man so i thought of a plan .... that was to steal his computer and come on here lol and now he wants me to fit him some RAm what a man lol im goin

  • true colours
    April 19, 2007

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    Awwww! I love it! Thank u for makin me smile. Hope ur ok. It'd b great to hear from u. Take care x x

  • wanaderer
    April 19, 2007
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    Nice

    very posative, and true to well done if everyone did that we would all be laughing.

  • jedidaddy74
    April 18, 2007
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    Wow!

    I love this poem. Well done. The rime is so smooth, thank you for sharing such a nice poem.

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