Revelations:
Ever wonder why I’m so silent?
It’s those words I dare not speak
The chanting of that spell whose solemn words freeze my heat.
Flowers & Tombs
Red & Black
Dancing chants, the song of he damned
Blood & Snow, so cold yet warm
The winds of fantasies that gleam so bright
Pandora’s box of mysteries, calling out to me
Telling me to sing, a song so dark
That’s why...
Ever wonder why I’m so silent?
Its those words I dare not chant
Its words so cold and apocalyptic
which the prince of darkness seeks to hear
A world by my feet,
my song so heard,
a song of darkness,
whose solemn words I dare not speak
Author notes
Its something I just wrote up for total randomness
A contest entry
- I want...totaly weird randomness...and beauty...amaze me lol by schrodinger2011.
324 points, ended May 12, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Its nice
I like the way yo uthink, u have an intense use of words that can capture you or even let u wander on. gd work u. -
I like the opposit's you used here, it made the poem loud like. Keep up the good work!
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Small, simple, and powerful thats the symbol of a downright great work, which is what you have presented here, i wish you all the best in the contest, good luck
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