Anata-no namae wa?
My name is Madeleine Elise Smith
you may think many things about me,
but you wont learn anythings about me if you
don't ask,I'm tuff i can stand up for myself,
i don't always need your help but i do have
lots of friends
Anata-no namae wa?
Madeleine Elsie Smith
i don't care what a wear if its black do you care?
if its pink i care,i hate it.
do you care if i hate it?
will you judge me by my likes?
Anata-no namae wa?
Madeleine Elise Smith
I never stop writing poetry,
never stop playing video games
and never stop watching naruto
and i never want to stop breathing
ever,but some things have to happen
Anata-no namae wa?
Madeleine Elise Smith
i don't like pink,i don't judge people
i don't know,i don't like to tell you off
but i will if i have too i'll embarrass you
in-front of the whole class
i speak my mind and you can take it way from me
Sayonara
A contest entry
- Who Are You??? For BIG POINTS :) by GiftedPsychosis.
4000 points, ended May 23, 2007, 74 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Good Job!
Very interesting... Title's a little confusing, but okay. In the first stanza, shouldn't 'tuff' be 'tough'? And do you mean 'I don't care what I wear' in the second stanza? Those are the only errors that I can spot. Overall, very nice job. I like how you told me that you speak your mind and are not afraid of what other poeple might think. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
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