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Musical Madness

beep...beep...beep da beep da beep...beep...beep
the sound of the alarm
IRRITATES the nerves.
whhhoooshh...wooshaaaa...whooooshhh...whoooshaa
washing machine
cleaning and renewing
the fabric that hides
our shame.
tinka.tinka.tinka.tinka
raindrops hit the windows
replenishing the thirsty earth.
ooooommmmmm....ooooommmmmm...ooooommmmmm...
the hum of electricity
has become repetition
in our lives.
BOOM! BOOM! BADA BADA BOOM! BOOM!
a knock at the door
who could it be?
everday sounds
creating Musical Madness.
LISTEN.

ooooommmmmm...
tinka tinka tinka tinka
beep...beep...beepdabeepdabeep...beep beep da
BOOM! BOOM! BADA BADA BADA BADA BOOM! BOOM! BADA BADA BADA BADA
beep...beep...beep...beep
whoooooshhhh whoosha whoosha whoooooshhhh whoosha whoosha
BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! beeeeeeeep...
oooommmmmm....ooooommmmm...oooooommmmm...
BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! BOOM!
whooooshhhhh.

hear the world
making beautiful music.
Listen to YOUR world
can't you see
it is playing a song for you.

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  • Larue
    April 19, 2007

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    Wow, this is nice. Grammar wasn't great, but the piece is. Gotta love onomatopoeia. Thanks for entering!
    -Skye