Her eyes are shining with the sun
Her hair flows down her back
The elegance that she holds
Came from the
Only heart-broken war.
Her pale skin shines in the light
Her black dress glides down her body
A cascade of radiance
The perfect sign of the Maiden's
Only heart-broken war.
Her heart hangs on the balance
Her soul flys to the sky
Welcome the torment
Of her Life's
Only heart-broken war.
Her hands grip at the flow of hair
Her mind snaps in half
When her life can't straighten
It's her
Only heart-broken war.
Her voice rings through the trees
Her body bends into the grass
The screams make everything break
With her
Only heart-broken war.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Broken heart war" interesting piece Tawni. I am sorry you are in a battle such like this one. I agree this is a good piece of work. I hvae an idea where this came from and im sorry. This is one war your not alone look around ya sometime and look at all the support u have behind you.. Please change this once and dont be so independant like you normally are.
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i like the imagery in this poem but i do thnk verizon should put out a lawsuite
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hmmmm, i like this, even thou it has a sorrow about it, i still like it, keep it flowing my friend, and know that in this war you are the victor
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