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Rest In Me. . .

 

 

I saw you standing there

all alone~

no one to call you friend,

no one to call you family,

 

 

this broke my heart,

sent a chill through me,

'cause you see,

that's not the way i see the world.

 

 

in these troubling times,

everyone needs someone

to call "friend"

 

 

to have a place to call home~

a heart, to rest in,

to feel safe within.

 

 

come child,

rest in me,

i will love you,

 

 

i will protect you,

keep you safe,

 

 

come child...

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PerVirtuous
    April 19, 2007
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    Very nice and sweet. Three bunnies for this!


  • EmeraldDreams
    April 19, 2007

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    This is so gorgeous! The words are so tender and heartfelt, and I agree completely with the sentiment you have expressed. We all need a friend, and somewhere to call home. Thankyou for this beautiful entry!


  • Desire gold member
    April 18, 2007

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    Precious!!

    This is one Precious Powerful piece You have penned and I just said a mouthful
    Spoken with Sincerity and from the Heart of a Gem!!
    Thank You for sharing this my Friend
    Gorgeous verse!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • FisherCat
    April 18, 2007

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    Fantastic!!!!!

    This was absolutely amazing!!! And I know you are always there to lend a helping hand. I so much enjoyed this read. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece! Best of luck in the contest.


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    April 18, 2007

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    This is beautiful! Another amazing poem from you, and it's times like this where I like to display it loud and clear...
    HEY, MY AP MOM WROTE THIS!
    Yup, I'm very proud, and I love this poem, it's beautiful, so compassionate!


  • poet2angels gold member
    April 18, 2007

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    so lovely!

    What a beautiful poem, Sunshine....
    Compassion and tenderness in every line...like a soft lullaby

    Lynda

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