Poetry is the key
to life,love,
and the soul.
Written in
so many ways
and variations
it guides the
soul to be free.
Poetry ulocks
the mind as a
a key opens
a door.
Author notes
My first poem submitted to a contest, so if you have any suggestions please feel free to share them.
A contest entry
- What is the point of Poetry by Old Poetry.
1000 points, ended May 7, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Write Whatever You want by okadadokie.
600 points, ended April 29, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your entry.
This is a fine, compact (less than 50 words) offering that expresses a clear view on what the writer believes is the point of poetry. It may not be comprehensive but it is clear and, apart from one typo (ulocks for unlocks) is well written. It is a pity that there is little effort to address the 4th criteria and reference the work of other poets but is still a fine piece written in the spirit of the competition.
Jim
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i think this poem is perfect the way it is..it flowed really well and was really great and powerful as well keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest.
XTashaX -
this is good. very well done.
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You are so totally right. Poetry is the key to life, I believe so anyway, it captures and captivates the mind, body and soul. Such wise and truthful words. Great job. Best of luck.
~Oka/KC -
Nice
I like this. I sometimes I prefer short, simple, and to the point. Easy on the brain when you need to be refreshed lol. For me personally life and love is the key to my poetry... maybe a few other things but mostly those two lol.
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I certainly agree with every word that you have written here.Poetyr sets our souls free.Well done on this one, Ros
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