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am i still standing?

I dont always know where i stand
all i know, is that i still can

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  • PrettyRagDoll
    May 18, 2007
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    I absolutely love this. It speaks of personal strength and the understanding that you will be okay, regardless the circumstance. I like when people pose the title as a question, then answer it in their write. Thank you for sharing this piece in my contest!
    -BabyBear


  • sluha
    April 22, 2007

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    I think its so true... honestly... sometimes we don't realize where we are standing but we are just simply standing... I dont have much to say in a simple and yet meaningful piece... The title is kinda like a third line I think... because it adds to your piece as well... because you say "Am I still standing?" and then the piece goes on fastly... but thats just me... good job... with the small words yet meaningul... I have hard time with that... thats why I write short stories sometimes... (I am still writing my big novel... that I'm starting to think is never going to be done) but anyways... great two lines...