What if I told you
We were meant to be?
Would you believe me?
Don't tell me I am crazy
Because I love you.
Some people wait a lifetime for someone like you.
I may be dreaming,
Maybe you're not real,
But till I wake up
Can we try to make this work?
Some people search forever
For that one special man.
Some people wait an eternity
For a love like I have for you.
Won't you please come back to me?
A contest entry
- Anything (within reason) Goes by Larue.
335 points, ended April 19, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - How do I tell him how I feel? by Slashes of Color.
800 points, ended May 14, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nice job, this flows very well together. This spoke to me deeply. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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Very touching poem. I'm going to be critical for a moment - if you really, really want the reader to feel the poem, use all the description and literary devices you can. It works wonders on an outsider's interpretation. Great writing!
-Skye -
i feeel like this rite now....i know tht feeling..greatky described
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