Im your candy dimond princess
as scrumches as can be
When you get that hungry look
i always let you feed
I let you eat off my heart
and crunch away my soul
but when your all done eating
ill always have s'more.
you tear me all to peices
and pop me in your mouth
but when i start to melt down
you always take me out
you wrap me up all safe
and save me for another day
but when that day come
youll go on my tounge
and i'll watch you melt away.
Author notes
hehe...i like this one ...i has alot of metaphors..
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- Anything && Everything (Shoot me up side the head) --all ages-- by Marilyn..
475 points, ended August 11, 2007, 58 entries
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i must tell u im loveing this poem bunches of bunches great job.....
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This is incredible. I love the carried metaphor throughout of being like candy. Excellent write.
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Your an amazing writter...this is such a good poem and it shows You and Levi...you too are so cute together!!!!! I love you and I love this poem...the imagry is most amazing....S'more...you make me smile!!!!!! yet again...I love you
♥Ashlee -
i loved it ..it was really metaphorical..i loved it
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