The moon shines bright in the midnight dark
Noisy silence clamours all around
All alone yet surrounded by life, I sit
This is my place, this is my dream
And nothing can harm me here
Softly dawn breaks on the horizon
Sensuous tendrils of sunbeams embrace the land
In the distance mountains are perfectly outlined by the glow
Alone I sit and alone I stay
And nothing can harm me here
The sun hangs high in the midday sky
Hoofbeats approach in the silence, though no horse yet is seen
Maybe this is what I am waiting for
This is my place, this is my dream
And maybe things are getting better
Red as blood the sun tumbles down
Orange evening glow fills the sky
The sound is close by, though nothing is in sight
Alone I am still, though this will soon change
And nothing can harm me here
Midnight black once again
A sprinkle of stars sparkle
Now I see who is here
This is my place, this is my dream
But dreams can be shared...
The end is unknown
Waking conciousness interrupts the bliss
Back to everyday life, never knowing
All that is certain...
It was my place, it was my dream
And nothing could harm me there.
Author notes
Fantasy (I read the rules!) Based on one of my more bizarre dreams.
A contest entry
- Dreams by k2vet.
600 points, ended April 27, 2007, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like it. Very well writtern and a good style. Flows really well and didn't feel forsed (spell?) either. Well done

