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Hello Darkness

Here you are again
Everywhere surrounding
Lurking in my dreams
Living within me
Overlapping reality

Damning my thoughts
Arrousing suspicions
Raining down in tears
Knowing intuition
Never will you leave me
Enveloping chaos
Stealing inner happiness
Still, I'm Lost

     

            Always Lost.

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  • Desire gold member
    April 18, 2007

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    Powerful!!!

    Missed Your presence LoOopy
    Happy to see You are back~ and have picked up
    the pen~
    Powerful piece-Acrostic penned!!
    I wish You much Happiness-
    Hope school is going great~
    Love and Light Your way Sweet One!!

    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Lo0opy
      April 20, 2007
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      Thankyou much D I hope some more words come out of me soon, I've been holding things in too long; they're bound to spill out eventually. Thanx for still reading!

      ~~T~~


  • Shattered Remains
    April 18, 2007
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    Hmm, where is this coming from, I thought you were all happy these days, you should be writting about pink bunnies and stuff, I'm just kidding, good write, probably one of my favorite acrostics I've read...

    • Lo0opy
      April 18, 2007
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      yes, I'm happy in some aspects, but there's other parts of my life that things aren't so great. That shadow is always lurking close by. As goes life. Nothing's ever perfect right? I'll try and write about those pink bunnies haha But only if you write about puppies and baby ducks